First slow track. Need some critisism :D

http://soundcloud.com/happyghost-1/the-idea-1

Any critisism is welcome. Even if it is “**** YOU!”

not really my style, sounds like a good intro to something, sounds alright as far as production, but i think it should go somewhere else, its too constant, keep working, it’ll come but this track sounds like an intro or the first break in a track, gotta take it to the next verse/drop…

Thank ya very much :smiley: I tried to change it up but i honestly couldn’t think of much to change, those heavily delayed audio clips were a last resort to be honest, but whatever thanks for your critisism :smiley: