First Tech House Track, Need criticism

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Hey guys,

This is my first tech house track and I want to get some critique before I make it a public track on soundcloud.

Any advice is appreciated! And you can be honest, I dont take things personally.

Cheers!

<EMBED src=https://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F29422766%3Fsecret_token%3Ds-x35C2&amp;secret_url=true width=“100%” height=81 type=application/x-shockwave-flash allowscriptaccess=“always”> Techy Sh!t by IAmValence

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Def not a tech house track but it has some good vibes going on. Has more of a big room prog sound.



Not a fan of the original so that taints things but def on the right tracks

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You definitely clicked the wrong link. Sorry the embedding wasnt working… Its the link above the embedded part of my signature.

Called “Techy Sh!t”