First track, advice andsuggestions needed

Hey everyone,

thats a not ready version of my first track.

I would like to hear what you think.

What I could do to have it more well sounding ect.

Im realy not into producing so far, so please tell me what you think.





Version 2



Untitled version 2 by Paulectro





06.11 20:00 GTM+1

Update:



So, here I am again, invested 6 more hours today :wink:



Changes:


  • changed BPM to 127 instead of 128
  • added a new kick with more punch
  • made the drums more intresting at some parts
  • removed the chorus on the base in the breaks
  • several changes in the attack behavior of both, the base and the lead
  • basicly, I’v changed the whole arrangement
  • better intro added
  • better outro added
  • worked on the breaks
  • several minor changes
  • worked on the master EQ



    To do:
  • make the beat more interesting
  • breaks need further improvment
  • breaks need more tension
  • add more FX
  • intro workaround
  • outro workaround
  • find a high sub melody for the middle part
  • remove the empty space in the end

Your track has a nice groove, I think you need something in the high frequencies and maybe some work on your breaks. Also not sure about the kick, it doesn’t pop out, maybe sidechain it if you haven’t already, or maybe find a Kick with more punch.

Thanks for the comment.

Of cause, the breaks are not jet good enough, especially the last one.

Im not sure about the kick, I have tried one with more punch and were not sure about the sound and the feeling it created in combination to the whole sound but ill check again.

I will try to find a nice high melody to play alongside… Thx for the sugestion.

Just a thought for you to try and i havint heard the original sample yet (sorry) i will tomorrow when i have better speakers not on this thing.

IF you wanting a kick to come through, give a little boost between 3.81khz and 5.07 on the eq and bring out that clicky wooden feeling and stick a little overdrive on, play with settings get a subtle effect and that will hopefully make a difference to kick cutting through :wink:

[quote]xxgrandxx (10/06/2010)[hr]Hey everyone,
thats a not ready version of my first track.
I would like to hear what you think.
What I could do to have it more well sounding ect.
Im realy not into producing so far, so please tell me what you think.
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If I had to pick the Favorite sound of the track I would say its the bass . Very deep and my"KRK 8s" where happy with the bass munchies :D

I like it mate. A punchier beat would be cool, I’m loving the bassy elements. I like where you’re getting with it. Keep up the good effort, and I look forward to hearing how you get on. :smiley:

Thank you so much! Its nice to see that you kinda like it.

Ill change it and will try to have the suggestions implemented if I like the way it sounds.

If there is a noticeable progress Ill Post an Update this evening.

It’s good work in progress. Don’t change it too much if you can help it. Keep it up :wink:

So, update is out,

please read the first posting!