First Track - feedback please

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Here’s my first full track, its still a work in progress but i wouldn’t mind some feedback and a few pointers

Cheers

Michael

hey micheal like the track real nice effort man !:cool:

i think that unless intended it  you need to make your kick more prodominent

if you got a click sound and layered it on your kick it would make  a difference and stand out more

 3.37 it starts to sound like a pro outing but when your subs come back in your  kick is clouded you could eq to get a better fit but in this instance id sidechain my sub bass…on the whole your barking up the right tree man .

I like the twinkilly lead sound going on … well done m8 :cool:

Good First Effort, Its a little bass heavy for my liking (that’s probably intentional) i really like the sounds in the break down. The Arrangement could benefit from a little more work, but i suck at arrangement so don’t take advise from me on that :wink:

Thanks for the feedback lads. I must have go at reworking it. Hoping to post a few more tracks in the next few weeks 

very very good first effort…this got sth of oldschool electronica…

in my opinion try to use more reverb and make a bigger breakdown…

tks/dimitris