First track Feedback

hey guys love to hear some feedback on my first track. Its home mastered so keep that in mind if I get decent feedback I will get it mastered properly.



SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds



Thanks in advance


Around the 1:00min mark you have the low rumbling bass and kick. I'd suggest to cut away or dip or sidechain the two a bit more.

For the rest this is quite an energetic track. Nice work!

Overall sound and mix is great! Agree with above about the sub.



Im not really feeling the whole breakdown thing… just dosnt seem to lift the track.

Thanks for the feedback guys I will look into the 1min mark, the breakdown I will have to leave because I want to move forward with other tracks though. But thanks for the feedback appreciate it. :slight_smile: