Hey,
Well after a lot of watching videos here and practice, i would like to know from you where you think i need to focus on!
Dont expect much from this track ( iam almost ashamed to share it ) but i want to know where i am at the moment!
Any comment is appreciated 
melody- try using chords not notes, chords are pretty, notes are ugly
mixdown- some parts were just way too loud, others were not loud enough
fx- try switching things up more adding more oneshots more sweeps more crashes more sweeps lol
intro felt very long. fx felt forced into the mix. I got bored but thats cause LA house is more clubby and happy. you used a minor scale making it sound sad or angry or whatever.
Im gonna leave some comments on the track for some problem spots i thought could use some work
Thanks mate,
I really had help on your advice!
Here is my allready alot better project:
SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds
Iam curious what you guys think of it and what are the points i need to aim for to became better in:cool:
sounds pretty good left some comments on the track.
overall transitions are what you should work on next
that synth i mentioned just mix the volume down a little, its a little overpowering maybe too much compression
Thanks man again for the qritique!
What do you mean with the transition?
transitions between breaks and verses/choruses. very important to get it right. it moves the track along in a nice way