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Here’s the full track I posted like 2 weeks ago called Passport. I needed feedback and i made some adjustments on it. Let me know what you guys think!br
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[url]https://soundcloud.com/rivi17/passport[/url]
Hi mate, br
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It sounds very robot at the moment, the chords are decent and you can do something with them but the groove is boring and doesn’t get the listeners attention. Add some more hats/percussion/sample loops to get ideas going and see what comes out. br
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The main pluck lead needs some movement also, try giving it some reverb to space it out br
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2:20 could do with some pad backup for the chords to build atmosphere as it needs something here br
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Be creative mate, try different things, use processing delay/reverbs/fx/sends to make the picture stand outbr
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