Like the motive. But: Over all you need another layer in the mainsynth with more low frequencies. Now it's a bit raw.
I also don't like the qualitiy of the vocal. Seems to come out of my phone xD Need also more low mids to make it sound fuller. At least I want to point out the fills in the drops. They could be a bit more complex to achieve the label standard.
But it has potential. 2 or 3 more hours of work and I would listen to that!