Game trailer music, need feedback!

I’m pretty interested in making music for games, and for some practice I threw together some sounds with my music on top of an existing game trailer for NFS Shift, just wondering what your opinions are or what I can do to improve. Thx!

 

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yVcTS8BamHI

That wasnt bad dude,tune seemed to go with the trailer in parts where it has a slow motion section etc

sounds good man, i think you pulled it of well,sounds professional to me:)

works well but could do with a bit more bottom end and stuff … listening in my studio its very top heavy … works well with the trailer