Half finished Psy trance track. worth finishing?

Andy Bayley - The Power of Positive thinking (clip) by AndyBayley



i have posted this one before, but have had a long break from studio due to manic life and selling house etc! back on now though, but not so sure about this one anymore. heard it too much i think. what do you guys think?

It’s It’s a pretty good Trance tune mate but lacks the drive and faerie dust of good Psy.

Try making your lead a bit edgier and inject some attitude by looking at the type of kick you use. And wear stripey leggings and attend yogurt weaving workshops too! :stuck_out_tongue:

This is a Psy track I’ve been working on (there’s plenty on my SCloud page)It’s called “Witchcraft”

http://soundcloud.com/craic-addict/witchcraft (for some reason I can’t embed SCloud player-do ya need special permissions or something?)

here’s another I knocked out in about 2hrs this evening called “Daa WeeWee Atoo”.

http://soundcloud.com/craic-addict/daa-weewee-atoo

gimme a shout if you need some specific tips mate…

[quote]craicaddict (18/01/2012)[hr]

http://soundcloud.com/craic-addict/witchcraft (for some reason I can’t embed SCloud player-do ya need special permissions or something?)

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When you post, click HTML at the bottom and you should be able to embed your track.

<object height=“81” width=“100%”> <param name=“movie” value=“https://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F33728125”></param> <param name=“allowscriptaccess” value=“always”></param> <embed allowscriptaccess=“always” height=“81” src=“https://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F33728125” type=“application/x-shockwave-flash” width=“100%”></embed> </object>  <span><a href=“http://soundcloud.com/craic-addict/daa-weewee-atoo”>Daa WeeWee Atoo!</a> by <a href=“http://soundcloud.com/craic-addict”>Craic Addict</a></span>

like this? There is no HTML button mate.  Have tried turning the browser off and on again.  Say wha?

[quote]craicaddict (18/01/2012)[hr]<object height=“81” width=“100%”> <param name=“movie” value=“https://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F33728125”></param> <param name=“allowscriptaccess” value=“always”></param> <embed allowscriptaccess=“always” height=“81” src=“https://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F33728125” type=“application/x-shockwave-flash” width=“100%”></embed> </object>  <span><a href=“http://soundcloud.com/craic-addict/daa-weewee-atoo”>Daa WeeWee Atoo!</a> by <a href=“http://soundcloud.com/craic-addict”>Craic Addict</a></span>

like this? There is no HTML button mate.  Have tried turning the browser off and on again.  Say wha?[/quote]

HTML is at the bottom of the message box when you are typing a reply.  It is right above the “Post Reply” button.   Click the HTML button first before typing your message and embeding the track.   The track should show up when you post the reply.

not really my thing these days but i loved the vocal and some of the elements were quite nice, id like to hear a slower deeper version in some other style :stuck_out_tongue:

na mate.  There’s Post Reply, Spell Check, Preview but no HTML :doze:

[quote]craicaddict (19/01/2012)[hr]na mate.  There’s Post Reply, Spell Check, Preview but no HTML :doze:[/quote]

Hmmm… I don’t know then.  

 On the bottom left corner of the message box I see “Design”  and “HTML”.  They are above the Post Reply and Spell Check buttons.

[quote]craicaddict (18/01/2012)[hr]It’s It’s a pretty good Trance tune mate but lacks the drive and faerie dust of good Psy.



Try making your lead a bit edgier and inject some attitude by looking at the type of kick you use. And wear stripey leggings and attend yogurt weaving workshops too! :stuck_out_tongue:



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**** thats where ive been going wrong!! i will try the stripey leggings! haha! in reflection i shouldnt have labeled this as psy. thanks for listening mate and i listened to your tracks. they sound cool… nice filtered leads! u should finish them!

[quote]ekko (19/01/2012)[hr]not really my thing these days but i loved the vocal and some of the elements were quite nice, id like to hear a slower deeper version in some other style :P[/quote]



funny you say that. ive got a few versions of this. the vocal was my main inspiration for the track, and i have made a start on a more groove based version. will put it up after the weekend. thanks for listening

I wouldn’t give up on the track if I were you. You already have a pretty solid feel and the instruments sound good together. Nice bass and lead. Kinda gives it a mysterious vibe. Also nice work on the vocals.

I know how it can be when you have listened to a track far too many times. It’s good tho, and it sounds like its pretty much done. Don’t let it die!