Hi Phil, can you let me know your thoughts on my latest track please

Hi Phil, can you let me know your thoughts on my latest track please - just anything you notice and what specific areas you think need improvement etc?br
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Thanks mate,br
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David.

I would defo boogie to that.br
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the top saw might be a tiny bit too loud.br
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you could maybe get more creative with the builds and transitions.br
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Reminds me of this for some reasonbr
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have a listen to the journey… i.e. how much it develops from start to finish.br
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might give you some ideas for how to progress your track with different percussion and sounds.

Thanks Phil. Really appreciate the way you give feedback really quickly, and your feedback and advice is always specific and useful - really helpful.br
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I’ve just renewed my subscription for the third year, and a big part of that is this service where i can post my tracks on the subscriber only part of the forum, and you give your feedback and opinion - so helpful.br
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Please don’t ever take this part of the site away!br
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Just one quick specific thing i wanted to check - does the track have enough bass - as this is something that i’ve really had to work on?br
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Thanks, David.

Yeah bass sound just about perfect

Music to my ears (literally)!br
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Cheers mate.