House track Nearly finished

Music Production Track Feedback
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Hi,

I am going to add a bit more time to the track and some finishing touches. Constructive comments would be kindly recieved.

Many Thanks

Mike.

http://soundcloud.com/mr9carter/pepper-min-mr9carter-mp3

 

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Hey mate



I think the ideas in this are cool, there’s a good track here. But as it is now the structure doesn’t work well. The only break down in the track comes after 30 seconds, thats hardly enough time for a DJ to mix the track in.



At 1:38 there’s a what seems like a weird glitch. Not sure if that part of the track or some sorta error but its doesn’t sound right, might wanna check that out.



And at 1:50 theres a lot of clipping when that crash comes in.



Main thing is the idea for the track is good! Hope this is helpful!

3

Ted,

Thanks for the feedback and for your time. Everything you have noted is already in my schedule with the exception of the clipping.  Thanks for spotting that i would have missed it.

This is my first attempt at a unique professional track and i really want it to be good.

Thanks again

Mike

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This track is now very nearly finished (I believe) Not quit sure with the lead out though.

http://soundcloud.com/mr9carter/pepper-min-unsigned-unmastered-final-mr9carter-mp3

Thanks

Mike