I'm a completely new producer to the world of trance, and Ableton itself

SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds

this song took me 2 hours to roughdraft not more then 15% done, tell me what ya’ll think :D?

If wrong forum, you can move it.

First of all, please embed the code from soundcloud by clicking the share button there:

Secondly, there's lots of stuff that needs hours of work. And I don't think it sounds like trance at all.

The track is too loud.

Think you should put a bit more effort in it, before posting.

Definately watch all the trance tutorials on this site, especially the ones done by Chris Agnelli and follow along and do the things he does yourself. I mean this site is filled with trance stuff so should definately help you out. The rest is just practice.