Is this any good? I'd love some feedback

This is my first real stab at creating a full length track. I need some honest feedback on what sounds good or what could be improved. Thanks guys :slight_smile:



[url]http://soundcloud.com/dj-kairotik/i-disappear-mastered[/url]

I hit you up on soundcloud mate.



Nice track, everything blends nicely! If I were change anything, Iā€™d swap your two breakdowns, the one near the end has such a nice build to it, plenty of energy, it would sound awesome slamming into your main section. Only a thought though, the tune is good as it is.



Danny.

nice track dude. it kept my attention all the way through.



i left some comments on sc.



congratulations on finishing your first track