Looking 4 feed back

hey guys…looking 4 some help…

how does the sound sound

does it flow right to u

does it sound in tune

does it need more or less





i think i add to much vocal and may be able to make 2 diffrnt tracks…

any tips will be helpful



thanks



http://soundcloud.com/gilbertgold/nightcrawlers-push-the-feeling

sounds like the beats are phasing a bit in places… you could try quantizing the original loop?



Its quite relentless… maybe add a few breaks and builds… filter some stuff down and up… drop out the kick or hipass filter it etc.



I always try to look for some semblance of a verse chorus structure. V-C-V-C-B-CC



I really like the acidy synth bit… it sounds quite chorusy… so maybe have that as a theme that drops in and out.



Having more struture will build anticipation more and give people the feeling that “that cool bit is coming back around soon!”

good feed back!!..thanks… im going 2 apply these things to the track im working on now…