Just Looking for some feedback.
[url]http://soundcloud.com/henrycarlin/untitled-wip[/url]
Conceptually, with a bit of fine tuning and a better mixdown this could come of a very nice club tune… I think the first thing I would personally sort out is the kick and bass, either they are clashing or the kick drum is doing something weird, honestly not sure…
Hope you dont take offense to my criticisms.
Im not one to talk much anyway since my kicks and bass always clash 
I liked the use of a little vocal fx for transitions, that was nice!
try to open but doesn’t work the link…
Ok I fixed It
yeah that kick and bass need to be sort out they seem to be clashing that bass tone sounds like its crushed
Yeah I think the bass before the fix sounded a bit better actually…
The crushing is taking away its bottom end and reducing its impact.
Have you tried sidechaining it more? Maybe use multiband effects to distort the top only so that the bottom stays cleaner too.
Ive fixed the kick and bass i just need to mix it and its done thanks for the criticism