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Almost complete with this, just the last mixing and mastering left :)br
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Tell me what you think, good and bad feedbacks :)br
I really appreciate if you give me some advice and tips because I haven’t finished a complete track yet, even that I have produced a while now 
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Forgot to raise the master volume when I exported it…br
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THanks 
I made a fatter kick for the track: br
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Please can you embed the link (soundcloud, song, share, copy embedded link, past into post). It’s much easier for users to hear you sound then, I will have a listen when I get home, I can’t copy the link on my phone 
that kick seems to not fit that well, it overpowers the track in my opinion.br
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that is just my opinion though.br
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other than that i think your on to something nice :)br
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What Ax said…br
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The kick definitely is overpowering. The overall instrumentation is good though and the riff works well.br
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It goes completely off key during the breakdown mind and the string stab you add after the breakdown doesn’t fit rhythmically for me.
[quote]jonsloan (05/04/2013)[hr]What Ax said…br
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The kick definitely is overpowering. The overall instrumentation is good though and the riff works well.br
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It goes completely off key during the breakdown mind and the string stab you add after the breakdown doesn’t fit rhythmically for me.[/quote]br
The “string stab”, do you mean the stab in the middle of the break?br
Thanks for you feeddback :)br
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EDIT: does is goes off key at the whole break, or just the ending of the break? Because at the end of the break I automate pitch up to the master then pitch to normal before drop.
The whole pitch bend that starts at 4:20 is not working mate.br
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The stab that sounds off to me starts at 5:22 it might be a flute now that I’ve listened to it again. Don’t really like with when it comes in and then when you reintroduce the riff at 5:55 they def don’t sit well together to my ears. It’s the rhythm between them that feels odd.br
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[quote]jonsloan (05/04/2013)[hr]The whole pitch bend that starts at 4:20 is not working mate.br
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The stab that sounds off to me starts at 5:22 it might be a flute now that I’ve listened to it again. Don’t really like with when it comes in and then when you reintroduce the riff at 5:55 they def don’t sit well together to my ears. It’s the rhythm between them that feels odd.br
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Yeah you’re right, thanks :)br
Ill add something else instead of the pitch bend, i still want to have something uplifting.br
I will change and not make the flute and riff play at the same part.