Long time since I’ve posted here I’ve been really really really working hard on trying to get some original productions that are standalone great, but I’m having a hard time. Was wondering since I always get really good constructive criticism/feedback here, if you guys could tell me what you like/don’t like. Every time I think I am making a house song it ends up being trance so whatever genre you want to define it feel free to. Basically I understand the biggest problem with my work is being a little repetitive but honestly all good songs are.br
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There’s a lot of very rough parts in the song so I don’t need advice on the mastering of the song, since this is basically a version made in probably a few hours or so of work.br
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PS - Tear it to shreds if you wish, I don’t mind I do this as a hobby with my time off from work and am very shy about sharing it with friends so please do!br
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I’m not a big fan of the melody. Go over it again man. Also the build up is a little messed up.br
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The kick could be more present and i want a clap/snare every second kick, to give the track so variety.