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Got some pretty good critical feedback here before, was wondering if anyone could check it out and let me know.br
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Thanks, and even if you can’t enjoy the song at least the cover is nice 
Nice track, could do with a few refinements too Firstly the kick does seem a wee bit out of place in the drop. Personally I would go for something a bit harder and tighter but with heavy sidechain on the synths to really get that pumping feeling going! br
Also on the build I think the synths could do with a bit of eqing to tighten up the bottom end and brighten up the top. br
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Then I personally would change all the midi files to one long note as opposed to multiple hits on each chord, it will help to gel the sound together if you get what I mean.br
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But i like the arrangement and the melody so good job :)br
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They say it takes 10% to do 90% of the work on a track, its all the little things that take up the time :Pbr
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Stu
Agreed, I like the broke up part of it though, I just made a sustained melody track, but I can agree with the eq’ing, and then the kick is a Avicii technique I was trying out, he for some reason puts a really short decay quieter kick right before the first kick of the chorus, I kinda like it though.br
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But again I really do appreciate the advice.