-I think the vocal chop at :25 could be SLIGHTLY louderbr
-I like that rolling percussion sound at the end of every 8 bars (i think 8? lol)br
-:25 - 1:18 kinda dragged on, I think you should more elements inbr
1:50 I like it here, I think you should make the synths stab faster, since the BPM is so high already, iono, just IMObr
Nice work so far, keep it up!