My 1st hardgroove techno attempt

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Hey :)br
Since this is my first attempt of a hardgroove techno track, I would really like to hear your opinions. Mind that the track is not finished yet, so bare with me ;)br
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Regardsbr

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Can’t listen to the track right now as at work - but embed the soundcloud player in the post as makes it easier for people to listen - that way you might get more feedback from people.

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-Clean drumsbr
-I think the vocal chop at :25 could be SLIGHTLY louderbr
-I like that rolling percussion sound at the end of every 8 bars (i think 8? lol)br
-:25 - 1:18 kinda dragged on, I think you should more elements inbr

  • 1:50 I like it here, I think you should make the synths stab faster, since the BPM is so high already, iono, just IMObr
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    Nice work so far, keep it up!
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I’ve finished it :Dbr
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Nice job man, sounds reallyyyyy good!