My 1st techno style track

hi , here’s the first techno track ive created . wanted to create a umek style techno track like i like so much. i still needs some tweaks and maybe change a few sounds but the general idea is there .so please have a listen and all comments and suggestions on what could be better is allways welcomme and appreciated , thanks! SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds

[quote]dj-why? (25/07/2010)[hr]hi , here’s the first techno track ive created . wanted to create a umek style techno track like i like so much. i still needs some tweaks and maybe change a few sounds but the general idea is there .so please have a listen and all comments and suggestions on what could be better is allways welcomme and appreciated , thanks! http://soundcloud.com/andy-green/lost-in-the-forest-layout-first-edit[/quote]

you just smashed it on your "1st " effort bro … totally smashed ,it man you have the same taste as me bro quality tune  get it out there now

But you work with mark knight ?

[quote]egg2 (25/07/2010)[hr]But you work with mark knight ?[/quote] hi thanks for the nice comment … :slight_smile: no i dont work with Mark Knight it was a sort of contest where you had the opportunity to make a song with some pieces Mark made and if good enough get released on toolroom. dont think i get much of a chance there ,due to some time shortage and family issues tho… :frowning: . well anyway thanks again for the response and when its done ill be sure to get you a copy … :wink: cheers

too humble production wise your on it man !:cool:

Good track mate, full of energy …



Though maybe too much for too long. Maybe that first drop doesn’t really drop enough perhaps as it goes straight into another pretty high energy section. Have you thought about lowering the energy there and building more sharply again after it?



Seems like the synth/bass line is almost saying “we’re rocking it out” to me. I can almost hear that line as a vocal in it.



Helluva track though, way better than my first ones.

[quote]jonsloan (25/07/2010)[hr]Good track mate, full of energy …



Though maybe too much for too long. Maybe that first drop doesn’t really drop enough perhaps as it goes straight into another pretty high energy section. Have you thought about lowering the energy there and building more sharply again after it?



Seems like the synth/bass line is almost saying “we’re rocking it out” to me. I can almost hear that line as a vocal in it.



Helluva track though, way better than my first ones.[/quote] thanks for the comment .yeah i know it needs a better breakdown, wanted to see if it was ok , still gonna work on it in a few weeks . first make some new stuff so i dont get bored with the song…lol thanks for the time to make a constructive comment tho ! cheers.