My electro house

my track is under my account plz leave feed back i no it lacks feel a bit robotic im trying to understand the groove in ableton live 8 this is my very first attempt at anything like this.

I think its a pretty good job for a first tune. The beginning was a little iffy, but most of it seemed to work together alright.



The part after the first breakdown I thought was best, the bass and vocals fit the track real well.



The last part, where you dropped/transposed the vocals down didn’t work for me at all, and I found the lyrics to be near completely unintelligible.



Feel free to nit pick my first tune sometime!

thank you for replying any news is good news at this stage