im not afraid of constructive criticism!
http://www.mediafire.com/?zq2nhjaqcfm
ready to re-revise
Ima send you a PM. Like the tune!
Raymond
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Pretty cool man, has a bit of industrial vibe to it.
Made with the DaftJustice material?
yea a good portion of it
would it be possible to get some more feedback from other people?
PM
Sounds a bit mono, I’d try to spread it out across the stereo field a bit more.
The main bit crushed riff-line dominates the track quite a bit. People generally will center the bassline with the Kick, but I find when the bass is rather powerful, it can help to pan maybe only 3-5 right or left and turn up it’s spread some - I think it helps not crowd the kick while still allowing them to gel.