My first attempt at an electro track. feedback appreciated

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This is the first track I have ever completed, but still a work in progress :stuck_out_tongue:



SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds



I made this track using purely Ableton Live 8 Suite. I know a few parts may sound not the greatest like the intro bass and the breakdown bass, I think there is a bit too much happening with the bassline so it starts sounding weird! Any suggestions on a fix would be great and in general any feedback on ways I can improve the track would be appreciated.

Thanks for listening =D



EDIT- I changed the link to the reworked version :wink: