My first complete track :-) Please let me know what you think

I’ve actually managed to complete a track for once. I’m sure i’m not the only peep here who has trouble finishing tracks. I felt I had to finally follow through and mix that damn thing down :slight_smile: br
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It’s currently un-mastered (professionally). I mixed down at -6db, followed with some slight eq boosts and limiter gain to bring volumes up for listening/preview purposes. br
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Please let me know what you think. I didn’t want to upload the whole track at this point, but would like to know what feel about this in generalbr
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Hi Ryan, just had a listen to your track. Lovin the melody of it all dude, its definitely got potential.br
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I reckon some huge claps on the beat of the snare after the breakdown would give it that main room vibe, if that’s what you’re goin for…br
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Would love to hear the whole track so that I can get a better feel for it all :slight_smile:

Ryan - if you’ve completed the track - post the whole track up!br
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Arrangement is one of the most important things in dance music.br
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If you don’t post up the whole track, no-one can hear the full arrangement and comment on it.br
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I just had a quick listen, and it sounds good, but re-post with the whole track, and then i’ll comment on everything - including the all-important arrangement!!!

Thanks guys…full track belowbr
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wow very well done. awesome vocals. did you record them yourself or where did u get them? sounds pretty professional.br
loving the breaks. definatly feels like a tomorrowland track

Yeah very nice track. br
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I just think that it could use a little ‘filling-out’ to take it up to the next level, by adding a really pumping and sizzling open hat that comes in to drive things along, and then adding a percussion loop or two to add to the groove and again provide more energy and drive.br
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I think if you add and mix those two things well, you’ll have a good professional sounding track.br
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Thanks for the advice, appreciate it.nbsp; I’m going to play around with some hats/perc to fill it out a bit on the top end.nbsp; I’ve listened to the track so many times now and do agree that it’s missing a bit of energy in places. Hopefully this will be sorted by dropping in some additional loops/PPClexxx, the vocals actually come from a sample pack I bought some time ago. Just took one of the verses from that and played around with it. Was a last minute decision to add in the vocals but think it fits in quite well. Let me know if you want to know which pack it was/PPCheers

Some nice and good quality sounds in here, like the crisp energy coming through the sound of the higher melodies.

Quality track!!