My first track

after following a few tutorials i decided to have a go at making my own track, its in a reasonably unfinished state and looking for comments from anyone, and advise on what you think may be missing. be harsh if you have to!

SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds



Its good mate. The lead is a bit trancey for a house track, even a prog house track but its still cool. Nice work

thank you! yeah i was thinking of changing it. but i thought id be best leaving it as it is - it felt right at the time so i might move on. do some more tutorials and then maybe do another!