I just spent a month creating my first trance track. I’d love any reactions!
Hey there @pxlmover
Nice one and good work on production & mixing IMO. Only point I could underline ( at least to my listening ) is the song structure, I found the break too long and coming too much sooner in the track as well as a bit empty during break beginning and middle part. Since you started to build energy during the first part of the track, getting so fast to a very quiet & rather long break takes out the listener enthusiasm & attention.
For the rest, good sounds choice and mixing and overall good production level 
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