My new amateur electro? track

Hey guys. This is my first post here. I just finished my fourth track. I think it has a sense of humor. Trying to improve…br
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hey kamel.br
you are on a good way!br
but he drops could be bigger. the bass needs improvement because it’s not as dircetly “in my face” as those other typical electro house tracks.br
great work on the percussions though,br
the melody is a bit to simple in my opinion.br
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keep it going. br
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also: fix your link :wink: