hey would like to know what people think of this i know its not perfect
still stuff to do feedback would be good 
thanx (good or bad lol )
nice start to this one man, I like the bassline melody, it could drive the track hard, however it’s lacking right now with energy… the breakdown could lead back in to something big but you’ve lost a lot of impact, I think you really need to dull (filter) the bass before it kicks in again so that the energy is blasted back into the track… decent so far though
Thanx for your feedback