Hope you can check out my tracks, feedback is always appreacated 
http://soundcloud.com/conorsewell
Listening to road runner at the moment mate
Kinda has a mr oizo sounds in it. Chugs along nicely. Not sure on the way the vocal stutters just before it kicks back in but the rest of it is very nice has all the right elements.
Its prehaps a little repetative id add in some automation in areas opening the release on synth sounds etc
very well made mate
Cheers for the feedback m8