Dont know where to go after the break. any help on this one would be of great benifit. Im open ears to all suggestions . Stream Dave Murphy- Track ID by DaveMurphy | Listen online for free on SoundCloud
Honestly bro, I like it as is.
I just feel the breakdown should be extended and remove the kickdrum at one point for a bit and add something in to change it up further. Maybe a piano segment (too typical and expected for a track like this though so maybe a Key synth instead) or add in a pad or just something for a bit.
The intro and extro definately need work (obviously I can see youve just faded them in, so I am assuming that is not gonna be the final intro/extro anyway. Try and stay away from just a drum beat start up, its too typical).
I also feel the 2min to 4min mark can be shorted ever so slightly.
I like this track quite a bit, has a very nice vibe. Good job!
Hard to explain it but my favourite thing has to be the environment youve created, theres this weird choir’ish synth pad in the background that I am liking a lot.
Thank you a lot for the kind words and even more for the very constructive feedback and also taking the time to listen. Great feedback this is why I love this forum took ur advice man on a few things will send over the finished product when done