Just want to mention that the track is made 100% in Reason 4.0 no others software or hardware used, the tune is still a work in progress.
comments will be appreciated, bad or good 
Palalila
I really like it, especially as it was all done in Reason.
I liked the vocal but it needs more effects in my opinion, or perhaps pitching down? Not sure.
more effects, huh…yeah you have a point…will do 
i like the vocal but agree that it needs more effects and a little more variation
Variation…I believe that too, can you give me an example…what should I do? probably sounds stupid but I tried and I can’t do it right :hehe:
or a similar track to listen to make an idea
add a second verse that is different but ties together well with the other parts of the song. you could choose to either bring up the energy level, slow it down or whatever comes to mind…listen to almost any song and you can see this structure at work
10x for the advise, will do