Feedback always valued, thanks!br
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So there is some cool grooves in there. But the whole thing is not well prepared. Its still sounding especial by the transitions , how can I say it softly, to simple. You need to work that more professional out. I now its easy to say but much harder to do that. You need experience, the feeling when has to change what, in what and you have to have the tehnical knowledge how to realize that practicly. ( I am as well not a professional, but I can hear that)Youre on the way! Learn,learn, try and try and watch a lot of sonic academy tutorials. Even try to rebuild a track you like, so you know where your limits are and what you need to learn additionally. Anyway, thats as well lots of fun 
Sven, I knew I could count on you for some tough love haha, Thanks man, you have a great ear!br
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The thing about it, is like something you wrote in another post, I didn’t want to mess with it too much, as I was afraid I would lose the main idea of the track. br
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Right now I don’t have the technical knowledge to do everything that I want to do or have to do to make it sound pure professional. br
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I think I am starting to find my sound though, just only one thing to do: keep learning :)br
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"tough love " thats cool Yeah, as long youve got the feeling and will to develope, your really on the right way. I m allready a bit afraid of posting soon my new track, after all the critics I post allready.
I am as well not satisfied with my productions but I really hope to make progress in my development as well. I hope it at least. We will see.