New haunting progressive house song

This is a little different from what I normally write, hopefully you guys will dig it. About halfway through I was thinkin’ it might be too spooky but I think I like the result. Look forward to seeing what you think.



Verbala - Lucid (Original Mix) by varsamusic

[quote]verbala (27/08/2011)[hr]This is a little different from what I normally write, hopefully you guys will dig it. About halfway through I was thinkin’ it might be too spooky but I think I like the result. Look forward to seeing what you think.

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I really liked the song.  I didn’t think it was too spooky.  But I like darker tracks.  In the right set it would sound great in a club.  :cool:

It’s cool so far, but imo, it needs some kind of hook. Keep it up! :cool:

i think it is very nicely produced, it sounds professional for me, and i like the mood as well, it keeps me in the present :cool: these are my subjective observations:


  1. i would try some brighter sound, maybe a pad sound, or a lead.


  2. i agree with djzmo, i would try to add a lead, or some kind of melody which keeps the interest up.

i really like it as is, this kinda sound appeals to me, you could add a dark melody or even some weird out of tune synth stabs or something to give it more interest i guess but for me the mood of the track is just right :slight_smile:

good quality production man, as ekko said it would sound nice with a dark melody as a hook somewhere and some 1shot stabs… cool vocal and sweet reverb-drenched synth sounds :smiley: