This is a little different from what I normally write, hopefully you guys will dig it. About halfway through I was thinkin’ it might be too spooky but I think I like the result. Look forward to seeing what you think.
Verbala - Lucid (Original Mix) by varsamusic
[quote]verbala (27/08/2011)[hr]This is a little different from what I normally write, hopefully you guys will dig it. About halfway through I was thinkin’ it might be too spooky but I think I like the result. Look forward to seeing what you think.
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I really liked the song. I didn’t think it was too spooky. But I like darker tracks. In the right set it would sound great in a club. 
It’s cool so far, but imo, it needs some kind of hook. Keep it up!
i think it is very nicely produced, it sounds professional for me, and i like the mood as well, it keeps me in the present these are my subjective observations:
- i would try some brighter sound, maybe a pad sound, or a lead.
- i agree with djzmo, i would try to add a lead, or some kind of melody which keeps the interest up.
i really like it as is, this kinda sound appeals to me, you could add a dark melody or even some weird out of tune synth stabs or something to give it more interest i guess but for me the mood of the track is just right 
good quality production man, as ekko said it would sound nice with a dark melody as a hook somewhere and some 1shot stabs… cool vocal and sweet reverb-drenched synth sounds 