New Here, Hello

I’ve joined SA to help push my writing and mixes even further. br
Looking forward to your mix notes everyone. an extra pair of ears always makes a difference. br
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Track 1: https://soundcloud.com/devasion/universe/s-v5c0ubr
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Track 2: SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds
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cheers and thank you

Hey there, not really my genre but for me both tunes are nice. From a mix perspective i think the stand out thing I notice is that the sounds you’ve used are not particularly tight. The kick on the first one specifically is flabby and if I’m hearing right has a click on the tail which is putting me off listening to it. I would suggest putting an envelope on some of your percussion and just shortening some of the sounds to get them tight then working on the effects to bring them out. Also more stereo width, most of the sounds seem to be sitting very central. That’s my 2 pence worth

Hey, br
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thanks for the notes, ill definitely try and improve upon everything you’ve mentioned. br
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cheers!