Hey guys,
Would love some feedback to my track -Ly on my soundcloud page!
If you have house music tracks, I would love to hear them as well!
Hi, so I listen to it, and its hard for me to judge it. But I will try. So first of all I like the elements of the track, the atmosphere. but for my opinion they are not sitting well into the mix. They are all to loud or wants to come to the front. So they are fighting with each other more then they play together. I think you limited and compressed the masterchannel to hard so everything is getting loud. I think if you do some volume adjustments, equing and decide whats in the front, back and in the space it will sound much tidier. You can as well automate that to bring ones this or the other thing to the front by making it louder or automate the filter/eg a litle. Another thing I miss some litle drive in the track, everything is just playing arround but does not have any drive. So maybe al litle more drive in the bass-line could solve that. So this are my opinion, if its right or not you will have to decide by yourself. there are some nice dark elements what I like very much. Hope its help you a bit 
I know EXACTLY what you mean, and those points you have made were some that I was worried about… If there is no drive, then it is kinda just blah, you know… I will try to tidy it up, but it is clear that I have a lot of production technique to learn.
Mastering and mixing of the track proved so time consuming for me, I just had to let it go or else I would keep at it still… have to get it just right you know.
And I would like to add that it is my first track produced, so obviously it would be extremely shocking to me if it would have been a homerun, you know 
Thanks for the feedback! Really appreciate it!
I will try to fix it up and see how I can get some drive in there!
Have taken this down in order to master it and tighten it up… Thanks for feedback!