New House Track - Feedback Appreciated!

Hi All.



Posting up my first attempt at a house track.



Been learning the past few months but this is the first house track I have kinda finished.



Please give the track a listen and let me know what you think!



Any ideas, tips or criticism is appreciated! Looking to improve on my next track.



Thanks in advance!



[url=http://soundcloud.com/vanvlack/the-beginning]http://soundcloud.com/vanvlack/the-beginning[/url]

fixed

Your kicks too quiet mate. When the whole track kicks in you can’t hear it at all