New original deep house tune, doback

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heres my latest deep house jam, im quite pleased with the end product and would love to hear what the sonic academy community thinks.br
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thanks guys!:slight_smile:

Nice one Ax.br
I did notice that sometimes the kick diminishes due to the bass attack of the synth. So some sidechaining and more EQ-ing could do wonders. Balancing out everything.br

At work now so i can’t listen - but i’ll have a listen when i get home and let you know what i think.

cool good, could do with a warmer sound, try running it through some tape or something

Hi Ax, here’s my feedback for you mate:br
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  • quite a good overall sound. but a few thoughts i had:br
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  • hats at the start a little harsh soundingbr
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  • percussion a bit flat - would prefer it if you panned the various sounds in the percussion loop - could use some reverb and processingbr
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  • start got a little boring for me - not enough variety and excitementbr
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  • chords not enough variety and movement, try filtering them up and down through out the trackbr
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  • try using a auto filter on the loops, create variation and movementbr
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  • in the break thought there was not enough happeningbr
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  • not enough energy in the breakbr
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  • arrangement could be improved, to get the control of the energy better and manage the tension and release more effectivelybr
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  • not really a proper build up for the drop, try adding filters and FX’s, rolls etc to create excitement before the track drops.br
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    overall not a bad effort mate, just need to work on the arrangement and getting more excitement and variety in the track, and controlling the energy.