New original house tune, Mumms

Music Production Track Feedback
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Here’s my latest original house tune running at 122 bpm.br
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Free downloads and as always feedback is greatly appreciated.br
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Thanks guys!:)br
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Nice track mate :slight_smile: I really like the perc and fx work, really good sound choice and has great progression! br
Btw what film is that sample from?? For the life of me I can’t remember!br
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Stu

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thanks brotha’! :Dbr
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its from the first film of the series Meet the Parents with Ben Stiller and Robert Deniro (sp?)

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i agree with xpa. the fx and the percussion is great. i like the idea of using a film dialog for the break! br
the only thing i dont quiet like is the sam short melody over the hole track. it becomes a bith repetative

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^ def. agree with you about the repetitiveness (working on it as we speak)… after having a bunch of fresh ears listen to the track thats the biggest piece of feedback i have been receiving. br
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thanks again guys :slight_smile:

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Yeah a fresh set of ears and a good break makes all the difference! Funny how quick you adjust to a song when its all you hear for a couple of hours :stuck_out_tongue:

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^most definitely xpa, couldnt agree morebr

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  • Thoughts the synth could so with a bit more movement. A bit flat and static. Also could do with a little more reverb and width to make it a little bigger in the mix. I think it needs EQing so it’s a bit higher in the mix and sitting above the other elements a bit more.br
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  • The riser didn’t quite fit the track vibe 100%br
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  • Just more automation and movement in the track generally. Gets a bit boring after a while.br
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  • Some elements need to be a bit bigger. Try maybe pannning the drums and percussive elements wider, and some bigger and wider synths i think would help.br
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  • Very nice pad, and i also really like the chord stabs. Sound perfect!br
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  • i’m thinking maybe it needs a bit more bass?br
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    Overall very nice track mate.br
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    Can you let me know what you think of my track in return:br
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    Thanks mate.br
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    David.
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Hey Ax, listened to this one as well, but it sounds to me there’s some key clashing going on.br
You have that LFO-ish pad, the stab, sax and bassline. It’s not working well together.br
Might wanna check them 4 together with a spectrum analyzer.

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[quote]daniaan (04/06/2013)[hr]Hey Ax, listened to this one as well, but it sounds to me there’s some key clashing going on.br
You have that LFO-ish pad, the stab, sax and bassline. It’s not working well together.br
Might wanna check them 4 together with a spectrum analyzer.[/quote]br
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will do daniaan, once again brotha i just wanna thank you and the rest of the community for all the help :smiley: