New progressive/electro house tune feedback?

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sorry my soundcloud wont work here is the download link>>



http://www.mediafire.com/?j3mjhnwtzkh



any feedback would be nice (im aware the volumes dips in the song, need to fix it cos its still not finished)



thanks

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any feedback???

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Just downloading now mate :slight_smile:

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Really good, i like the breakdown and the bass drop is really good.



Hmm, could the bass be made a little more “in your face” or not? Just seems to be lacking a massive punch which a tune like this should have.

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yeh your right, i bput a bit more distortion and bass boost on it, you think that will do the trick?

thanks by the way

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i like that little ‘the reward is cheese’ type of bleep in it

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yeh i had to edit a loop for tha, took a while bu i think its a nice effect:)



so any changes u’s think i should make?



i know the end needs work and some other people say the 2nd breakdown sound completely diferent to the 1st build up? would you agree?

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ive only been doin all this for only 4 month from absolute scratch, so at the minute i can probably only say that i do really like it.



its got a wkd 1st build up and th tune is pumpin!



love the bassline and all the little synth hits in the 1st riff like i said before, reminds me of ’ the reward is cheese’ (beltin tune)!



thats all i could say at the mo!



im lookin at makin a similar style to what you are so i’ll hopefully be takin tips of you if ya dont mind… lol!!!



keep it up dean!

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haha thanks yeh i love the little sounds deadmau5 puts in with those types of tracks so thought i’d investigate it! haha ill post up the final track when its finished thanks again!