New Progressive House Track - Clexxx - Not sure if good or not

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I made this track a couple of weeks ago, but i’m not sure if the melodies are fine, so i wanted to ask you guys if you could check out the whole thing right here and tell me what you think. thanks alot br
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Word up clexxx! You sure its all in key, sounds off to me…

I actually really like this.br
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Although the mix could use a little work.br
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Just the usual stuff like making the kick louder and more clear, and making everything clear and sitting in it’s own space in the mix.br
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And yes the vocals do seem a little off key. br
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But i like it.

okay, thanks davidmclean. I’ll try to fit everything in its place. I’ll try to make the vocals fit but its hard to find the right samples and put them together :/br
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@xpa i made the main synth by cutting out a sound out of a loop sample an pitched it into C3 - I’m pretty sure its pitched right.br
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the pad i added into the second break has the same notes as the main synth, so i dont really know why it sounds off :/br
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I’m using ableton live. maybe you guys could help me if i post screenshots :)br
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thx for the feedback

You always have to be more careful using things like sampled melodies and bass that it’s all pitched right, compared with programming your own sounds in synths.br
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Maybe something in the samples isn’t quite at the right pitch?

hmmmm I’m not sure, sounds a bit flat. How did you pitch it into C?

thanks for the fast reply. I used the spectrum to see what note it was and then I used a simple pitch to move it into C3. br
the funny thing is, that the loopsample i cutted it out from was my own one, which i made years ago with reason. I dont have file anymore :(br
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Hmmm I personally wouldn’t trust spectrum to make something pitch perfect. You should make a basic tone to C and pitch it by ear, then you would hear its right…br

hey yo :)br
I worked over it again and made a synth. i gave up on the pitched one. i dont know why it didnt work out,br
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I like this version better and i hope you do too. Please have listen.br
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thanksbr
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