sorry the other link is no good this 1 should be sweet
http://soundcloud.com/tracks/search?q=donstretchen
Not bad at all.
I see Jon has commented on several sections of the track on soundcloud.
Got to agree that the last part (most important imo) releases all the energy you built
throughout. I think if you go to work on the last part and keep the energy flowing you have a fine track.