New tech house traxk

Music Production Track Feedback
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Morning all hope you have a had a good weekend. I spent most of the weekend working on this track would like some feedback and opinions on it please would appreciate it

https://soundcloud.com/mochettomusic/last-night-original-mix/s-b57eI

Much love
John

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Your track doesn’t seem to be live any more

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works for me. pretty nice. at some point i really excpected to hear the sentence “in the beginning there was jack and jack had a groove and from this groove came the groove of all grooves …” ^^