New Techno Track: Deviant

Music Production Track Feedback
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Would love to hear some feedback on this, started working on it two days ago, was originally just trying to make my own bass stabs and then decided to make a synthed kick, the result is this track :P
Its my first proper try at techno, hope you all enjoy it! Feedback would be appreciated!
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well, I put it on and started to potter around doing other stuff on the computer and then realised it was coming to an end. Which means, for me, that it’s a tight track that moves along at just the right pace. I never once felt that it was dragging sections out nor that it had too many abrupt changes. It flowed well from section to section. Good stuff.

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Thanks, appreciate that comment a lot!



Always had problems with flow in the past, didnt wanna over do this one with impacts and what not, nice to know it works!

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the overall sounding is quite cool for me. i’m not producing in this style, so maybe my reflection won’t make any sense, but i would try some melodic change at certain points of the track…

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Ill be honest I was being very lazy wih this one, had ideas to add a little Tech Housey stab at some bits, or even better something along the lines of Oliver Huntermann’s Dark Passanger, has a cool melodic element which still sounds techno’ish!

Will definately take those pointers into consideration on my next track, thanks!

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I liked it a lot, Its not a type of music I produce or particularly listen to but I listened to the whole track through so thats a good sign to me! Keep up the good work!

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That bass has a really nice sound.

I think you should see it through and add the other elements you were thinking about.

Good work.

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Can’t find anything wrong with the track. Might not be a peak time techno track, but it’s a great sounding production. Was headnodding while working :smiley:

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Nice! Very deep and suspenseful. I really like the combination of the distorted bass and the echoing panning hits in the back. Kinda makes me feel in a cave deep below the earth haha.

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Thanks everyone for the compliments, never thought anyone would actually like it lol :stuck_out_tongue:



@smithee:

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!



@jbachr:

Would definately do that when I get the time. Uni’s a pain really and sucks up most my time…



@daniaan:

Thanks, heard your Point Blank remix, definately wowed me!



@Masseve:

Hehe, never thought it would bring a cavern feeling. Glad you enjoyed it!

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You’re a student too?

What are you going for?

Myself, I’m going for elecctrical engineering.
Currently loving Physics 2 since we are working with soundwaves and my experience with music is making me look like a genius in class. LOL

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hmm i cant see the link for some reason :S or the player thingie

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Nice track! Great texture and soundscape / atmosphere. Couple of thoughts:


  1. I would have LOVED to have the filter on that bass open up. Maybe feed it into a huge reverb / delay at the same time. Make it a big breakdown.


  2. Second half of track loses me. Wanted more forward motion – where’s the DROP? The song is just begging for something monstrous to happen about 2/3rds through.



    Best way i can say it is the production / mastering is superb, but the arrangement just feels a little unfinished.
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@jbach:

Study pharmacy so nothing is related to music :frowning: Am really jealous at Uni, everyone gets time to do what they want except pharmacy students, we are pretty much the only peeps at the Library :frowning:



@ekko:

SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds

Not sure why its not working, but thats the link.



@the geek:

If I ever get around to working on this track again I will definately take that into consideration, honestly didnt have time to work on the build ups and drops :frowning:

Thanks for the feedback!