https://soundcloud.com/frank-up/h-rdporrbr
The arrangement is done, but i put up a short teaser version.br
Any feedback from da technofolks would be nice 
Hi ma men. Nobody gives feedback. thats frustrating 
. Yeah, I listen to the track on different days and its hard for me as well to give some feedback. So I will try. br
First of all ther is really some niche things in there, but you know thats not enough. So I ask myself what is missing to become good? So I think there is missing one or some elemnents who are more sitting "in your face " a bit more tighter. like a cool groove, synth or a cool bassline who is pulling you and wants you to kep on listen. Everything on synths and stuff is pritty much in the backgrond and not defined enough. Hope I could help you a bit.