New track - different direction (ambient)

Definitely went off in a new direction with this experiment. Still needs polishing and a few more details, but thought I’d put it up for review/critique.br
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Hey Bit, This is a really interesting direction. Ive recently delved into some ambient randomly myself. br
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I feel like its nicely produced. Theres a great range of sounds and they mesh well together. Im digging your choice of elements. That being said I kinda feel like theres just a bit too much going on for it melodically to really strike me. like it shifts a bit too much and doesnt really settle. br
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However, the section starting 2:09 seems to hit something really interesting. Theres a tension that builds in there thats engaging.br
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Anyways, overall its nicely produced and theres some nice parts in there, and im just one person so take my comments as only just that much ^_~br
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