New track - feedback wanted! F4F!

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Me and my friend have been lurking around sonic academy for some months, but this is the first real track we’ve produced together, and we would love some feedback! br
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We will (hopefully) have access to a studio in a month or so, and will then be able to make a vocal version of this song. The low end isn’t the best, so any tips how we could get that better would be appreciated, and the chord progression might change depending on the singers prefrences, but besides that, we’re pretty pleased with the outcome of the song, but we’re always looking for ways to improve, so hit us with your best tips! :)br
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EDIT: lol forgot to link to the song, here it is: iframe width=“100%” height=“450” scrolling=“no” frameborder=“no” src=“https://w.soundcloud.com/player/?url=https%3A//api.soundcloud.com/tracks/150039021amp;auto_play=falseamp;hide_related=falseamp;visual=true”/iframebr
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Martinoscar

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Just had a listen to the track there. Probably just sits on the outside of what play but in parts I like it. Bass melody in particular. If the rest of the track had that kind of dark “mood/feel” to it I think it would be very nice.Thats just musical taste tho nothing to do with the production end of things. Thanks for the feedback on my track btw. br
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Best regardsbr
Mark

Thanks Mark! br
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I’ll try it out the next time I’m producing with my friend, thanks for the idea! :Dbr
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Best regards,br
Martin

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I really like this track :slight_smile: The drops could be a bit more spectacular but that’ just my own opinion. br
I think it’s good produced as well.br
Yeah vocals would be very nice to this track. i hope you repost this track with vocals on it. Looking forward to it :)br
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regardsbr
clexxx