New track feel free to comment deep tech

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The track overall works well but I’m not keen on the vocal. I don’t think it fits tonally with the rest of the track. If you’re keen on keeping it in there, I’d pitch it down 5 semitones or so. Maybe even an octave. You can hear the warping artefacts at the moment too.br
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Love the vibe of the track it’s just the vocal isn’t sitting well for me.