New track from Jean Batidas

Hey,



after some while here is a new track i’am working on!



I really could use some feedback in any way!





It will be appreciated!

It’s a progressive house track,

Witch i tried to have a bit Swedish sound.



Can you tell me i’am on the good way?

what can/must be better? or what do you like?



Iam still a beginner and i could really use some feedback!

Don’t pan your drums and bass. It tends to not be liked by almost everyone. Also, try to keep your sounds cleaner with low/high pass filters. And it could be a bit less repetitive, even minor variations your melody make a big difference in how interesting it is to listen to.

Your piano part at 1:32 doesn’t really harmonize, and it doesn’t provide tension like some “strange” chords do. At 3:12, you really need some filters, it sounds like a vanilla saw wave, not very interesting. Your high hats at 0:50 could use some eqing, make them quiter and less high end. You could also make your drums a bit quieter.

The part at 4:45 is pretty good though, and you had some pretty good elements throughout the whole song, but you really should spend some time on the structure and make it more than 4 repeated riffs throughout 6 minutes.

Good luck on your next songs!