New Track

Hey everyone I just finished my 5th track which is a remake of David Guetta’s Stay.I made itwith ableton 8 and just wanted to share it with you , any comments are welcome :slight_smile: I am still a rookie on ableton 8 ( self-learner gonna study soon on music technology:P ) but I give my best :slight_smile:



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4r63795Qiq8



( quality is wack on youtube so here is the soundcloud link )



David Guetta - Stay ( Steven Galan House Remake ) by Steven Galan

hmm, to be honest, the harmony could be better, the track is booring, there is to few happening, its basicly the same loop over and over again. The breaks are not realy breaks and the track needs lot of mixing and mastering.



That is my opinion.



Watch the production videos and build the tracks they do.

Understand what they are doing and try again.


Its a little heavy on the high frequencies and overall could do with maybe a bit more going on but it definatly has the vibe.



Listening to guetta stuff and then this you can see similarities :smiley:



keep it up mate

Thx for the feedback :slight_smile: I know the track needs more stuff , cause like u sayd not many things happen in it but yeah if u wanna learn to produce u gotta create music again and again , its the best way 2 practice :slight_smile: It’s just another practicing track :smiley: I’m still young got much to learn :slight_smile:

Right.

And then, if you did work on a track over and over again, you need to find the point were you have to stop and let it be as it is.

Anybody who knows where this point is? Couldn’t find it till now…

When producing, everybody, also the stars, generate so much garbage till they find a nother tune wich is perfect for them.

Keep it up!